[Mike Wrecka]

ya this battle had a lot of potential. even as it stands it was impressive

vulgar good verse. the flow was even better than your usual which says a lot. tbh very early in the verse I thought it was going to be about blanka from street fighter. and got excited as hell. lol. but ya man good verse I enjoyed it and its very clear you are here to fuck some people up and are fully focused.


lexicon, welcome to the league man. ive never read your stuff before. its clear you have top notch talent. the flow and content of this was very good. but obviously a half finished verse wont get my vote. I must point these lines out though

producing lucrative revenue; through beautiful ads
we guarantee to move consumers using luminous facts
without views from you, the clients, we'll continue to build
a foundation that proves useful; so let's move us some cash!!


that third line stretches into the fourth and goes a long way without a rhyme. but somehow you made it work wonderfully. I never like that method of writing in a text verse. I actually hate it usually but this just sounded great here. so respect for making me open my mind towards that a bit. if you had finished your verse this could have BOTW. oh well. stay signed in if you can and give it another go next week


thanks for the reads guy.

vote= vulgar