vulgar:
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Reindeer tusks hang over a fireplace; pangs of lust, outside it's raining gusts
Southside, it's mainly drugs - the alpines are gray and brusque
His singular view of the Appalachians and plainspeak thrush
Here was the story of a lonely suburbanite who can't be touched
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good story line, a bit depressing but good images.
i disliked the closing.
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such a good idea where this was going, I was really looking forward to it, but it fell apart around
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we'll make the world eat you up....chew....then spit u out
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if you had stuck true to the first stanza and delivered in that style all the way through, the vote would have been all yours.
vote: vulgar