Enjoyed the different references and the general approach but some parts are inaccessible. E.g., beginning with the "pentacle Dodecanese fractal harmonic series" seemed like too much and it was a bit alienating especially to start with it. If that was the purpose of that line (perhaps it was considering the title) then good job, but if it creating some confusion was unintentional then maybe consider setting up or making clearer connections to clarify an obscure phrase. Favorite part was this: "Nine levels of portals in the realm of devils’ and mortals at the helm of their morals
The creator of worlds and all HIS saints and their morsels all paint with their laurels"
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