/v Vulgar - hmmmm. tbh this verse felt incomplete. idk if you got the heads up he was gonna drop an unfinished verse or you just didn't have much confidence in your opponent. but either way, this was a good drop from anybody. liked the vidya references. favorite lines..
A Wall Street damsel was rather attainable
he'd made enough bankrolls to support a sample of grainy prose
as Amy glowed, he watched her glide, the studs on her bracelet flow
flowed real good, actually. just like how you worded that set.
even here..
Needless to say he wasn't the life of the party
he just wanted to spend the night with somebody
you got a gift with words man. hope to see you showcase your talents more thoroughly in the near future. creative story, ended rather abruptly but was developed well enough early on. good drop.
Lexicon - You should have asked for an extension man. You laid the foundation of a verse that could have easily beat what vulgar dropped. not to say... friday @ 11:59.. things would have ended differently. i like the offbeat scheme. you paved a path you should've followed. honestly hope you finish this and drop it in the open mic and tag our asses.
favorite set..
utilizing the true and tried tools of the past
our rudimentary rubric commit to units in mass
producing lucrative revenue; through beautiful ads
we guarantee to move consumers using luminous facts
favorite lines..
providing you, our valued clients, with a finest provision
with eyes for design, you'll find we know what's hot and what isn't
least favorite lines..
one half of the mass populace act on a brash process
called titty and ass logic, you figure it’s ass backward??
Observe how in past often the theme of an ad prospered
through scantily clad “objects” and sexually tagged concept
obviously an outline... just ext next time but keep doing what you're doing.
it would have worked out with some added effort.
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