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Originally Posted by ZYG
Sometimes 'simple' rhyme schemes are more effective than 'complex' multiple rhymes. Consider some writing to address themes of depression or nostalgia etc. In this situation perhaps move away from multi-rhymes especially ones that are close to each other and back-to-back because the nature of it would detract from the themes to develop. Worse still is when there is awkward wording because of a forced multiple rhyme. Why write something in an overly convoluted way just to meet some minimum requirement of multiple rhyming, when sometimes a simple and concise language with 1 or 2 syllable rhyme is more fitting?
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Completely agree, I hate it when dialogue has a shit ton of multies cuz nobody actually believes that is the actual conversation lol