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Old 10-24-2013, 07:59 PM   #7
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This was a nice battle, I enjoy both writers
both tend to remind me of better days to say the least
good match up to be perfectly honest...

Geno, You always have a flawless way of attacking a piece
you tend to put a lot of effort into the flow of the piece
which makes the read much smoother than most writers can attempt to do
it's always a pleasure to see you focus on a piece as well
it brings a little more...what's the word I'm searching for...
I'll think of it...then I'll use it..either way your verse was interesting
nice way to go at the topic

Split, It's been awhile since I've actually had the chance to see you..
it's nice to see you still writing, your verse showcases your growth
the idea you brought to the table was great as I continued to dive deeper
the flow was off at certain points, but not enough to damage your thought process
it kept a smooth transition from beginning to the mid section then end
I feel as you kept progressing through your topic you started to unwind
and it came across genuine...dope work

As far as my vote goes...and as far as this battle goes
it seems like a trip down nostalgia lane, nice work...my pick for BOTW
I enjoyed both verses but only one can come away with the win
both different writers with a great way of showcasing their skills
really kept their motive clean cut as well as...enthralling?
maybe that's not the right word right now, but I was quite impressed
as far as my vote goes, I'ma have to give it to Split for enjoyability
something about the end just stuck with me from his verse
tough choice to be completely honest...cheers gentlemen

v/Split
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