woah J. u went hard. i liked this. ur getting better and better. obviously you have flow/structure/scheming down. im just not too sure what your really ever going for, idunno its like u need to find ur identity to me.. u usually getting pretty emotional with ur stuff i think, like it comes from the heart, its mostly pretty serious, but i don't really know, something about it seems like ur trying to be something that u really aren't. just ur open mics i mean.. in cypher u fuck around a bit more. it just almost seems like u try to come off a little bit harder than u actually are? or like ur trying to go for this certain style of writing that doesn't exactly fit u???? idunno i could be way wrong here, just trying to give u some real feed with a different perspective. lots of quotables in this piece, cock in attendance sticks out lol pun intended. may more.. don't remember now, haha. oh and the end
The fires ready like Adolf
sprint for the verizon
you fags can't afford that straight talk
i was hoping you would add the rhyme for "sprint for the verizon" at the end, felt unfinished.. nice wordplay though
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