I grade my self a C- last week, going for extra credit assignment this week for hopefully a c+.
Malachi vs. Coup run it
Hmph vs. Red Glare ?
Mike Wrecka vs. Camp bell
MW had a very slow burning, smooth verse last week. If kat can coil it up in more complexity and with
more originality watch out full stop. If CB can shorten the lines, to avoid a monotonous flow it would due well with his narratives...zing. Close batt.
c.d.m. vs. Rawn MacDon CDM needs to control his piece and market it for the general public....dumb it down. Rawn just do ya thing...develop more, add more lines.
HelloKitty vs. Kuja -slight edge to HK,
cakecakecake vs. Innovator
Genocide vs. pohfig Pohfig bloom the flow and water it...let it flow and air out.
Zenland vs. zygote - Zen is confident right now, don't play with it.
Orc vs. King Keith --orc is an ogre, Keith needs to be smoked
Strikta vs. Frank --Frank on lock, frank on Moon.
Witty vs. Split -Witty utlize more fem rhymes, less on masculine...flow would diversifiy...Split, play around with some slants.
dead man vs. Nigma --Nigma you av about 19-20 syllables a line...cut that in almost hafl...polish up and upset dead man..you got this bro, despite the odds.
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