I'm late on the feed and I apologize so here it goes.
The positives:
I've noticed more and more lately that you have refined your style and have definitely found your voice as a writer. I noticed the emotion you put into your pieces before, specifically your HOF nominated work, but lately in each thing I read from you has been packed with emotion. That is your strongest point as a writer, and is possibly the strongest point of any writer. To be able to convey to the reader not only what you are feeling, but making the reader himself feel it. Powerful stuff.
The negatives:
If I had to choose a negative of this it would be that the rhyme scheme is too simple for my taste. With that being said, it's not that big of a deal because of what I just said in the positives.
I'd love to read another long ass work from you just like this. Nice work old friend.
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