Death had some good concepts here and there, but his execution was pretty iffy. e.g. the Hov Lane line that lacks the possessive S on Hov's in the wordplay. But I thought the NY State of mind line was okay. The Jon jones shit was a weak closer, but overall it was a solid verse.
Improv, you didn't start out too bad, but around the middle of your verse, it just seemed like you were doing too much. The board to death line and aer line both seem erratic. I kind of liked the Swanton Bomb line, but I just didn't feel like it was all that insulting
Overall, I think Shogun had the hardest hit with the swanton line, but Death was just all around more consistent with his lines.
MVGT - Death
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