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Old 02-18-2013, 02:15 AM   #5
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This was a good verse, only some parts didn't focus well. E.g., the "casual stuff" lines. Enjoyed the progression from cell to fetus - highlight was "some feelings, some toes." Just as an aside on the last line. There are some theories that argue that RNA not DNA was the basis of life on earth. And other ones that argue that viruses may have been the first self-replicating unit. It's pretty interesting and your writing/topic here stimulated some thought.
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