Zenland - this read, so well. so, very, well. i'm almost out of time right now, but i want to make it clear you really outdid yourself here. great piece. amazing story telling.
King ra- best i've read from you so far. very complete, great execution to a hard topic. just enough, not too much. i can't complain about any aspect of this piece, and i enjoyed it throughout.
/v king ra - his piece felt complete at the end. both were amazing though. simply amazing pieces. if zen had woven some more profound statements into the conclusion of his piece i think he would have taken this battle with ease. this was a hard decision to make, but ill stand by it.
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