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Old 02-18-2013, 02:11 AM   #9
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Good rhyming but you can expand the choice of rhyme schemes if your going for this approach. Try to use some different words to rhyme, more original is more entertaining. Malachi Thomas - Black Nostradamus was the best in that way.
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