Alright
Split, I will say I was slightly impressed...u have improved since we last collab'd. Story was on point, and entertaining..flow and everything was on for the most part, till u'd go and do some dumb sht like not rhyme...I unno if its for poetic reasons or to break or w/e the fuck, but yeah..and in the bottom half of ur third stanza..the fuck is that sht man...u almost threw me...just being real...but honestly not a bad verse at all...
Prophet, Im not going to b that harsh on...bc I was also impressed by him, sht read smooth and told a story...not my type of story, but non-the-less bc that dont really matter, but u deff could up ur complexity with rhymes..but good sht kid...
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