Wow @ this style clash...
Mike - I really enjoyed ur story...at risk of being a little cliche, you still pulled off a strong verse...Flow wise it was clean as fuck, content was all on point, remained on topic throughout with some nice allusions relating the two. My one problem with ur verse was some of ur word choices...i feel sometimes you could have used better adjectives to express emotion and/or better scheme rhyme wise...everything was schemed perfectly don't get me wrong, but I just felt that u could have utilized the same scheme and just maybe thought of a better rhyming word, in other words took an easy way out at times (saying this out of constructiveness, and this is strictly a person preference,) maybe incorperated a slant here or there...non-the-less it was a dope verse.
Frank- Man, alright bro, that sht was entertaining, I will not lie. You can captivate. But I'mma be real with u as well...i love your scheming and u know this already, but bro sometimes that sht don't sound right like u off a syllable or suttin and it b fuckin up the way it sounds...and u make this sacrifice for the way u work the aa,bb,c,a,c, sht..but theres gotta b a middle ground...anyways, u took that topic for a ride man. Dope verse, just felt u coulda used a polish..or somethin.
I know both u for mad years now...and i feel the way mike's sht reads is more smooth, while frank's sht just entertains the reader...anyways; just being real w both yall
I gotta go with Frank on this..
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