netcees top topical vs netcees top troll.
interesting.
crazy battle battle of the week, almost a playoff match kind of battle, created this hierarchy atmosphere.. For vertias to step into the circuit this week on a whim and write something as compelling competitive as he did not only saved one of the better verses you will ever read from being spoiled, but an entire league from suffering the consequence. You laced up and helped create a tone of what could be a paramount season indeed. This battle does not deserve to be voted on. This battle needs to be featured in the week 2 magazine as an Great Example of what this shit is all about. Two kids who owned their respected forums at another site clashing like this at this new venue is pretty amazing. Black, I read your verse before I wrote mine and was blown away and almost said fuck it, what am I doing. lol Dude that verse was a summarization of who you personify. That verse had a warmth to it that Black could never render. It took the dead Man to create that sonny oasis. It was like Eminems "I'm not afraid" - You broke new ground with this one. The palm trees and volley ball matches, really simple but relative like you stressed to Mike Wrecka. Watery splashes, man this verse came alive. This verse was special indeed. Keep setting the bar high. Veritas, I am familiar with your writing as well, and this was most woven I've seen you. In story-book-fashion you create a desperado duel and bring justice to one of the greatest movies ever made, City of God. The spanish subtitles came on the screen and I was like Diablo! You created a world. You implanted spanish words into my brain and made the piece personal, gave it authenticity, City of God. Delusions of grandeur/ Pollution of slander. Had it's multi moments but also showed neglect of schemes like "withering splayed" which I think had a greater effect because of it. Ended on some Quintin Terrintino shit too. Overall this battle was the winner so it doesn't matter whose the loser. I vote for dead man because word-play at that pace is impressive to say the least. 60 second visual versus a 3 hour movie. depends how long your patience is. until next week.
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