dope battle indeed. you guys really stuck on the topic more than any others ive read this week. im happy to say my genius inspired these verses. lol.
Zenland - really enjoyed this verse. I was picturing a teacher and a student in ancient Egypt. the teacher explaining the sun to his pupil. the best part was that you described the sun in the exact terms that I would envision them using in that time period with their limited understanding of science and the universe. yes they thought the sun died everyday and resurrected, which I wish you added to your verse. maybe you weren't talking about the Egyptians specifically but a civilization in that area around that time. you veered off that track later on in the verse and it lost that charm for me. and the rhymes got real simple towards the end. needed more multis. but real good verse
King - king went old school topical on this verse. using the ancient names and such. it was similar to zenlands in some ways. technically it was superior. and the vocab impressed me in some spots. really liked this verse as well. but to me it didn't really keep my attention as well as Zens. I don't know why it just didn't
overall - this is going down to preference and I slightly preferred Zens out of the two very good reads. thanks guys.
vote - Zenland
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