cool battle guys. quickie votes. sorry
Mr. J - good flow. you went really vague . like I didn't know what the fuck I was reading about vague. Im assuming you were personifying wind and describing yourself with those terms. kind of like a flex piece. like I said the flow was good and you had some stand out lines.
patrown - what you wrote was good. you just didn't write enough to get my vote. you are the biggest grammar Nazi I have ever seen when you vote. well at one point you used the word suit instead of soot. and that made me smile knowing that I could rag on you for it. good verse just too short
vote - Mr. J
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