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im amazed at how good your guys' editing jobs are.

Rawn. schemery was dope, flow was spot on. "Bacillus" is a cool way to describe it but also doesnt really mean anything. it was a light description that didnt go in any direction for me.. no doubt it was well written.

Innovator. you ended this on a really strong note and something that made me think about why people came to America, and why they stay here. wording was awkward in a lot of places and i see you scrambling for end rhymes, but it was a storng verse that definitely captured the emotion of the piece, encompassed the topic and like expanded on it too

V/ Innovator for a deeper verse.