[Adonis]

YD - Flow was butter up until "Cool see, pull me, bull steeze" Still flowed well, just weak rhymes there. So, I liked the verse, but didn't love it. For the most part I enjoyed the flow. Plenty of inners and multies to go around. I'm not sure if youre a vet, but this verse showed enough for me to realize that you can one day be elite if you hone the talent and style. I think your writers voice is dope and extremely voter friendly. The concept of you being the moon was dope, although you could have done soo much more with it. Either way, nice verse in the end. I enjoyed it and see many good things in your writing and very few bad. Elevate.

Magic Mike - lmfao, yes, I can make myself laugh. I see the use of multies in the begining and can't help but think you listened to some voters last week and for it...Kudos on that, not many people actually head the advice and attempt to use it as motivation."Trying and firing" doesn't work FYI. I understood this was Mario very early on, nice drop. Flow wise as always solid, a few hiccups as in simple wordings still, but I enjoyed it. The first had humor, which Ironically I'm not a fan of, but I see the appeal so don't hate when people choose to use it. all in all, an extremely well rounded verse that didn't really lack in any area.


OH man, I think I might catch flack for this vote, but it was close call.

On one hand, I liked the style of YDK, and enjoyed the flow but felt he came a bit short as his concept was super ill, but he didn't do enough with it. On the other hand, MW had a humorous verse which is different than the usual Sad story, with nice flow but honestly did not use the topic at all... Aside from the opening and closing 2 bars. With that said

V/YDK

MW's had a better verse in my eyes, but only slightly. After I weigh the use, or lack of use, of said topic the scale tipped in YDK's favor slightly