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Old 02-17-2013, 03:33 PM   #15
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Genocide: i like how you wrote as if you were in the mind of the inventor in the picture, loved your drop.
It maintained nice flow, and was a nice drop that kept me to reading.

Aviator suit like a noose, hoping i don't strangle myself
But i gotta break an anchor to sail, or an egg for an omellette
Praying I don't crash dive into my head like a cockpit
Submerging from this desolate vomit, feathered by hock spit
Locked in, looking like I'm dressed up in toxins
nice bruh

Orc: iv'e never ready nothing from you before but I liked yours. I liked the way you put things to get like an image. Near the end i think it kinda fell off a lil bit but nice nonetheless

get painted with the same brush & thinking becomes an art of war
no partial flaw; they say the worlds flatter than the nose of a fighter..


or
our mans pleads that with no past.. there's no gravity - no craft!
no man with his notepad.. forehead crinkled like hands in a soaked bath
his standard bears no flag, trying to manage both math and a ravaged up homeland


This was a dope battle, yall both took a different approach but i think Genocide was better all around than Orc, and his went great with the pic

V/Geno
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