[Malachi]

Really Nice battle

Mic Wrecka had a really dope stable flow, i enjoyed reading it alot. It went well with the picture. I like the concept he used for it too. I could feel the love in the verse.

became encumbered, with the doldrums of life,
never consolin my wife until I got some golden advice/
loves an emotional knife, if the marriage is dead,
clouds and thunderstorms will cause damage ahead/
but things left unsaid, never spoke, gave me hope,
after all these years drowning, now im swimming, afloat/
taking a soak in the obvious, a stream of consciousness,
collecting all the pieces from these broken promises/

One of parts i really liked, dope

Now for frank at first reading , i could tell your drop was going to be a great read. But when you got into it talking bout MJ and went away from these lines
George Bailey: What is it you want, Mary? What do you want? You want the moon? Just say the word and I'll throw a lasso around it and pull it down. Hey. That's a pretty good idea. I'll give you the moon.
Mary: I'll take it. Then what?
George Bailey: Well, then you can swallow it, and it'll all dissolve, see... and the moonbeams would shoot out of your fingers and your toes and the ends of your hair...

i was kinda confused. But further reading your verse had great flow, and i really liked it. I dont think anyone else wouldve thought of that. You paid respect the right way and with that you came with the better verse

V/Frank