[Split]

i had a really nice breakdown i lost, im simply not motivated to go through it again.

Dead Man. lyrically superior, very solid interpretation of the picture that would work as a standalone piece as well. i pulled like ten lines of quotes out.

Veritas. amazing angle, the rhyming was actually pretty solid in spots and overally i didnt see your structure hurting you too much. unusual for a Vertias verse, i thought the metaphorical connection was rather weak, but the plot was very gripping, and the portuguese was a nice touch. it was fresh.

however, dead man's poetic style resulted in a more powerful verse, i connected to his nameless numberless protagonist much more

v/ dead man