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this was powerful. i remember what you said about, trying to be real and honest and straightforward in writing, and how no one is willing to accept that

i think that the very simple word choice gave this a poetic feel, almost like Joyce Carol Oates' Four Summers or a Bukowski poem. and if you haven't read Bukowski, you should now. or even sign up for RIA's Poetry league. because your thoughts were simply put, but also worked together to create a complex emotion

i liked it.