Malachi you took me by surprise in this match. I am amazed at what you were able to put together this week. Though the mechanics/technical aspects are not perfect & need work, you manage to put together a decent piece here. To be honest, I enjoyed your content just as much as Split's work. If your story was more polished, you could have put up a solid fight for votes. Nice job in your first topical piece. I liked the beginning of your story & it got away from it's foundation towards the end, but with time, you will be able to write better & better. Hopefully you sign back up this season. Split, what can I say- a well written piece filled with strong word choice & the emotional/love vibe in there was cool. It was written perfectly to the picture IMO, with that dark, melodic visual. Good stuff by both competitors.
MVGT: Split.
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