very sick battle. props to both.
geno- man you came out swinging. brought that classic genocide flow. sometimes I read your stuff and im amazed at how it just never stops. the flow I mean. theres no pauses or breaks in it. you bridge every line to the next one seamlessly. I like the direction you took with the picture. told more of an overview of the scenario. didn't dig too deep. didn't really have a story arc. but the mechanics were off the charts.
orc- also a very good flowing piece. very well constructed. took a very similar take on the topic as genocide did. which I enjoyed. it got a little abstract in some spots. or the wording was just a little too technical terms. im not sure. a few spots I was like wtf is he talking about. and had to re read. it wasn't totally accessible. but it had a very strong story arc. it was a complete telling and you got way deeper into the story than geno did.
overall its geno's superior mechanics vs orcs superior story. both had good flow don't get me wrong I just think genos was slightly better. had a better structure. I had a tough time deciding on this battle. but I think I have to barely give my
vote - genocide
really good battle guys. I enjoyed both verses thoroughly. thanks for the reads
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