this was definitely a dope battle, definitely botw material.
Zenland,
pretty descriptive as far as planting a story in my head of two guys out in the middle of the desert, the teacher and the master (said knower) which I was feeling up until he seen the dudes with the crests on the hill. wish you would have went into detail a little more about who or why they were after you, just didn't seem complete right there. other than that i thought it was a good story that was executed well mechanically.
King Ra,
another great verse. reallylike the way you tell a story. it's almost written like it was a broadway play or something, either way i enjoyed this very much. the tale puts me in a medieval time feel, real knights of the round table type shit. my only problem is i didn't feel satisfied at the end. like i wanted to know why he was a peacemaker and a great king like the bold print at the end describes. idk just felt like it was cut short and almost dissapointed me.
this is a tough vote but i'm going to have to go with king ra just because i think the parts of his story that were good outweighed the lack of that missing stanza feel i get and although i really enjoyed zenlands verse as well i think he didn't come quite hard enough to handle ra this week. absolutely great battle guys
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