Mike - Was very easy to follow as the flow was excellent.
im not normaly one for romantic/love type verses but this
is up there with the best of em that I have read, heres
a couple of lines I enjoyed.
taking a soak in the obvious, a stream of consciousness,
collecting all the pieces from these broken promises/
even if it means flying, till me and space are colliding,
im redesigning constellations till our stars are aligning/
Frank - Yea at the start I wasnt sure where your verse
was going to take me, but it seemed to draw me in the more I read
and in the end left me more than satisfied, nice job.
Because back in the day. I didn't see color. I heard magic and taped.
Back in the day you was my brother. Michael Jackson the great.
Now they call you Wacko but they cannot assassinate
Your passion. Even if you are just a black hole plastered in decay.....
Who knows how many noes you had reenacted into shapes -
All I know, is your nose is pointed at the pyramids that backed you in the grave...
In the end my vote goes to Frank, overall I just enojoyed it more, good
match guys
v/ Frank
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