Thread: 16 bar I wrote a few months ago. Critique me, please. (Hawk Eyes)
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Old 02-17-2013, 09:34 AM   #2
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You have dope. Potential. Some pretty wacky content though. Structure and scheming are good. Just need to better ideas imo. Keep writing. Stick around. OM will get more poppin when the leageus over. Go sign in for more action though.

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