[Geno]

Ok
Clearly not the novice/heavyweights of the league. No disrespect

Symetrik.. I felt your story was immature, it lacked pizazz. Needs more creativity. More passion and feeling from you. You can clearly put a couple rhymes together and slap some content on down..it just doesn't seem like you really cared about what you were writing. Or maybe you ddid and just need a lot of time to grow still?

Breathless, awkward name dude
Yours wasn't to far off from the same as your opponants. I did though, feel that you brought a little more style and likeable concepts/content to your verse. I feel like you stole this one by a slim margin this week. Keep writing though man, you edged it here.. but without further inkering and expansion of your style and ideas... your not gonna get far against our more seasoned writers here on ncs.

V-breathless