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Old 10-17-2013, 07:49 PM   #4
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I really can't tell who is who on this one...
but I am familiar with both of you, it's a fun read though
the vibe you deliver is somewhat, bi-polarish
it seems like it's one mind writing ambidextrous
I felt after the first half of the first verse was done
the rest just seemed to flow together...the last verse was cool
I don't know what that middle part was doing there
but it blended it together in some weird, weird way...
dope drop though fellas
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