[Mr. J]

This was pretty interesting as far as elements go
I enjoyed both pieces because both writers are interesting to say the least

Vivid, your flow was good and the execution was nice
I felt that your piece conveyed a more...view of fire itself
which was dope, I felt like you had plenty of ways to shine
and you did so by showing many different aspects
it didn't lag much for that, very technical in your way of writing
smooth work

Certain, I enjoyed your piece because you brought a story along with it
it had a vibe that made it easy to read, it helped carry the piece
the flow was on point and the inhaling/exhaling brought a different feel
you surprise me as a writer because you have a smooth style
different from most writers that are around, nice work my dude

As for my vote, I feel like this one will be difficult
I feel vivid was doing good for the most part
and for some reason some parts felt...added on later
which may have messed with the whole flow of the piece
not to much to take away from the piece though...
Certain had some great execution, but I felt put off by the end
I fear the end came too abruptly for me...not a big deal
regardless...after reading this battle a few times my decision boils down to enjoyability
v/Certain