This pic reminds me of that Tag Tourney.. you were tryin' ya hardest
But it doesn't matter what angle you take, we'll ALWAYS see Bags re-lining your garbage
Really solid jab. Executed flawlessly. 8/10
You in a midlife crisis, outta shape & can't afford those rags
Last time you tried to shoot the Gap.. they wouldn't let you bring ya wardrobe back
I've seen gap plays before, so I feel like it's not all that fresh, though it is well-executed and not terribly played. 7.5/10
This faggot's outta his league.. & those shorts got me laughin' outta my seat
Dog, those busted-ass Kapri Styles could shut all of Brazzers down for a week
Honestly, I thought this was a fucking haymaker. Original, witty, well executed. I can't criticize it at all - 9.5/10
You're old as FUCK & idolize Marino.. meetin' him was ya highest purpose
LMAO.. I bet it left a bad impression when you thought pass protection was life insurance
Kind of funny. I didn't feel like it was really hard hitting, and I was still iffy on it, but still solid. 7/10
An effiminate Cuban dressin' like an NFL star's the worst gimmick
'Cos the only Sunday Ticket you got comes w/ a plate & a chair at the church picnic
Creative and well executed, but I just feel like the concept isn't all that insulting. 7.5/10
Even ya watch turned away from you, lookin' like a sideshow act
I ain't surprised.. this 60-year-old freak'd be scared to FaceTime w/ an iPhone app.
Another really fresh haymaker. I can't really criticize anything. 9/10
But this metro stays kitted out, from the Flexfit to them rare LeBron's
He'll even pull out those Wolf Greys.. arguin' w/ the stylist at his men's hair salon
Eh, I wasn't crazy about this one. It's still solid due to general execution 7/10
I could predict his whole verse.. leave this fat slob stuck in hysteria
Ironic, you got them GoldenEyes.. N64 was the year your raft washed up in America
I wasn't crazy about how you worded this, and I don't think there was really a great concept to be had here in the first place. 6.5/10
--> 77.5%
When it comes to the greatest u should not question nik
u a great, Neighbor… cuz ur belongings not passing the line shows good bum etiquette
Okay. I feel like the wording on it's a bit iffy and the concept's okayish. 7/10
NC would like to donate food before u die unfed fam
But all u need’s protein & u get plenty from the insects caught in ur spider-web pants
I thought this was far too simple to be impressed with it. 6/10
in the streets I grew up in u’d get snuffed in fact
fuck ya gun references… only thing in ur hood’s a skinny white faggot whose never touched a gat
I've seen a lot of in the hood/jacket lines. Like, that shit has been around since 2003. Execution is good though - 6/10
I’ll size u up using hand gestures & u’ll be plain nervous
one of ur wrists can be measured with my thumb & index finger like I’m saying perfect
Wording on this was ehish and I don't think there was really a concept to be had here. 6/10
for u it’s hard to swallow but again nik’s dissmissin him
If Pride has a hole in his neck… urs is an empty ditch where I bury u egotistical pink slip victims in
Not really feeling this at all. 6/10
u didn’t learn ur lesson u should just avoid these things
thinkin u can hold ur ground now… but I’ll make Outlaw pay like u got charged for loitering
You could've incorporated some kind of flip regarding loitering. Honestly, someone who got charged for loitering would hardly be considered an 'outlaw'. 6/10
I’m seriously tired & bored of beating clowns like this
ur last verse put us all to sleep… this time u came prepared to make a pajama party out of it
Kinda funny, I still feel like your wordplay is far too simplistic. 6/10
I’m dope like the coke I sneak in the country quick with no tax
I’m making an ass out of u… cuz it’s usually the mules that carry the bricks on their backs
Ass/Donkey lines, I'm just not feeling it. Concept is executed alright though. 7/10
--> 62.5%
I wouldn't say I was surprised by Neighbor's verse, because I already heard he was dope, but he did plenty to live up to the hype. The brazzers lines as well as the facetime punch were both killers, along with a bunch of other solid jabs in between. I definitely look forward to reading more of his work
Ill, you're a talented writer, the execution is really on point - but I feel like your concepts are just too simple half of the time and played the other half. If you could just dig a bit deeper, you'd be a force to be reckoned with
But as far as this battle goes, I felt like Neighbor was the clear winner
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