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StarFaggot · 10-17-2013, 06:11 PM

Cashius:

Just looking at his cubed dome angers me....That fucking wig is putrid
I was gonna hit this fag square in the head, but it looks like someone beat me to it
too obvious
I'll put my dick on the lips of your Indian bitch. My nuts'll barrage the hoe
I'll have that jump off SCREAMING when she goes down like her Uncle Geronimo
coolish
You can't afford to buy her nice things. Credit cards?...the kid has got a limit
Only time you could get her a fly coach bag...it's checked for free with her $50 ticket
lol, surprised I haven't thought of this. I'da worded it better
Bags is showing Malachi the ropes, in hopes that son'll be dating some people
If you're grooming a young dude...it's gotta be in one of the states where it's legal
this is cool
That chick he's sticking is a fucking disaster...this faggot should lose the whore
Any bitch that carpenter with wood looks like she was smacked with a two by four
I think if this was more simple it'da been more of a hit. Sometimes less is more but decent bar
You're a fucking joke, Alvin...you better believe it, my dude
You being HOF'ed had us ALL dead man...to the point we begged to be in it too
lol solid

This is a nice verse. Pretty straight forward with a lot of hard jabs.

Alvin Karpis:

Cheddar, paper, loot, tall stacks, all racks
Snake, fake, bitch, overrated, you see what we call Cash
concept is nice but the effect here is like eh
His rep is light he’d rather text than fight I met his type
I even tried to Coach Kidd on how to ball but now the Nets his life
this is coolish but rather simple and indirect
You champed the wackest nbl season & all ya lines need some help
You slipped through the cracks like pryde trying to commit suicide w/ a belt
ha, coolish
I’ll follow you to the bar then wait for the right approach
Hop up in Cash Cab but it won’t be a game when I slice ya throat
decent
Kill the hype you pillow bite and don’t have the skill to fight
Ask uh oh, your true colors are that little pink dildo type
don't really get the reference but I get the idea, not feeling
Listen though, you be simpin that’s why I’ll pimp ya hoe
I'll give that bitch a Backsplash in ya kitchen & save you a trip to Lowes
lol... nice

this was coolish but it was light

Decent battle here. Glad you both showed up. Cash's bars here were more effective. Both pretty much on the same plane creatively but Cash was able to put it together better.

MVGT Cash

10-17-2013, 06:11 PM	#8
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Cashius: Just looking at his cubed dome angers me....That fucking wig is putrid I was gonna hit this fag square in the head, but it looks like someone beat me to it too obvious I'll put my dick on the lips of your Indian bitch. My nuts'll barrage the hoe I'll have that jump off SCREAMING when she goes down like her Uncle Geronimo coolish You can't afford to buy her nice things. Credit cards?...the kid has got a limit Only time you could get her a fly coach bag...it's checked for free with her $50 ticket lol, surprised I haven't thought of this. I'da worded it better Bags is showing Malachi the ropes, in hopes that son'll be dating some people If you're grooming a young dude...it's gotta be in one of the states where it's legal this is cool That chick he's sticking is a fucking disaster...this faggot should lose the whore Any bitch that carpenter with wood looks like she was smacked with a two by four I think if this was more simple it'da been more of a hit. Sometimes less is more but decent bar You're a fucking joke, Alvin...you better believe it, my dude You being HOF'ed had us ALL dead man...to the point we begged to be in it too lol solid This is a nice verse. Pretty straight forward with a lot of hard jabs. Alvin Karpis: Cheddar, paper, loot, tall stacks, all racks Snake, fake, bitch, overrated, you see what we call Cash concept is nice but the effect here is like eh His rep is light he’d rather text than fight I met his type I even tried to Coach Kidd on how to ball but now the Nets his life this is coolish but rather simple and indirect You champed the wackest nbl season & all ya lines need some help You slipped through the cracks like pryde trying to commit suicide w/ a belt ha, coolish I’ll follow you to the bar then wait for the right approach Hop up in Cash Cab but it won’t be a game when I slice ya throat decent Kill the hype you pillow bite and don’t have the skill to fight Ask uh oh, your true colors are that little pink dildo type don't really get the reference but I get the idea, not feeling Listen though, you be simpin that’s why I’ll pimp ya hoe I'll give that bitch a Backsplash in ya kitchen & save you a trip to Lowes lol... nice this was coolish but it was light Decent battle here. Glad you both showed up. Cash's bars here were more effective. Both pretty much on the same plane creatively but Cash was able to put it together better. MVGT Cash __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B] Last edited by StarFaggot; 10-17-2013 at 06:15 PM.