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CopyPat · 10-17-2013, 03:33 PM

interesting. ur def original so far on the few things ive read, keep that up.. ur not getting alot of feeds probly cause nobody still really knows u yet. if anything i would say hold back a LITTLE on posting tooooo much material.. if ur posting 5 6 new threads per week as well as littering the cyphers with tons a stuff every day then ppl will just not give a fuck anymore and get bored with seeing u. try holding on to ur shit. u obviously write TONS and always have rhymes and ideas going through ur head. yeah get them down but don't post every single fuckin thing.....u know what i mean???? spread ur shit out a little..also its good for developing ur thoughts a little more, expanding on these ideas u have.. make them better, make them whole. i think u got potential. u just need to slow down a little, have rough drafts.. edit... take ur time dude. use the cypher to just fuck around but when u make a new thread make it count dude.

the verse was like i said interesting, u have some raw talent. almost poetic kinda style.. this had good imagery. nothing wrong with it.. just seemed a bit rushed, and could be better

10-17-2013, 03:33 PM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	interesting. ur def original so far on the few things ive read, keep that up.. ur not getting alot of feeds probly cause nobody still really knows u yet. if anything i would say hold back a LITTLE on posting tooooo much material.. if ur posting 5 6 new threads per week as well as littering the cyphers with tons a stuff every day then ppl will just not give a fuck anymore and get bored with seeing u. try holding on to ur shit. u obviously write TONS and always have rhymes and ideas going through ur head. yeah get them down but don't post every single fuckin thing.....u know what i mean???? spread ur shit out a little..also its good for developing ur thoughts a little more, expanding on these ideas u have.. make them better, make them whole. i think u got potential. u just need to slow down a little, have rough drafts.. edit... take ur time dude. use the cypher to just fuck around but when u make a new thread make it count dude. the verse was like i said interesting, u have some raw talent. almost poetic kinda style.. this had good imagery. nothing wrong with it.. just seemed a bit rushed, and could be better __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.