hahaha wtf. well yeah u surprised me with the ending lol. i def gotta give u props for originality.. and emotion.. haha u came at urself pretty hard, lol sounds gay. i agree with Leg, it was def all over the place and not smooth but that clearly was not the point here which was comedy etc.. it was different and something fresh to read, and a bit funny, and i was wondering who u were dissing right till the end so u tricked me there. check out my shit called another squalor i think u'll like.. its kindof along these lines as far as just dumb funny shit
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