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Old 10-17-2013, 12:37 PM   #13
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I thought this was actually pretty fucking dope. The middle verse was the best, the opener on the first verse was fuckin ILL, and I felt it fell off when it came to the last verse. Overall though this was some solid writing. Would sound fucking good on a track.
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