This was a cool battle short and sweet from both
basically came with the same idea and type of storyline
Tackling the subject differently at the same time
the execution from both writers was quite the same as well
looks like you two could have collabed on this piece
I enjoyed symetricks verse. the visuals were placed well
breathless seems to be experimenting with this style
but as close as you two were on this I feel....
well...I feel breathless did quite well so my vote is in his favoring
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