Zenland, your verse took a bit to get rolling. Then you got to the titular question and took off. The finish was very strong. Then Genocide came in and picked up right where you left off with furious rhyming. But he too trickled off a little at the end.
Quote:
"How the fuck do you sleep at night!?"
Well, you see I just creep inside your feeble mind
And dig down deep til I'm in reach of supplyin
Seeds of crime that leave lined inside people's eyes.
I know, I know, I'm evil, right?
Bitch please.
You best believe every breath you breathe is mine...
Every steps a leap in time, efforvescent demons rise
Epileptic ciezures climb, feast ur eyes, recollection leaves your mind
Resurected beast arrives, never left completely -sly
I just text graffitti lines with my empty liesure time
He's alive, reason I've been on a long hiatus
Tossed the basics, matrixed, flow is off the faucet gauges
Cultivated, skated, brought the one you've all awaited
Call'em satan, wipe the ultimatums off your faces
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Fire. Also, Genocide, your spelling was atrocious.
I think verses like this are tough to open and close because in a way there's no reason they ever start or end. There's no purpose. And you're rhyming and writing off what's already been written. So in a way what we're seeing is a snippet of an infinite rhyme, so it takes a second to catch it, and providing closure is tough.