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Old 02-16-2013, 02:23 PM   #13
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First off Mike's flow was cool, and that stood out for me. What really stood out for me was the mind of the main character. I resonated alot with that. Being a father and dad, it does feel like the weight of the world is on the the shoulders, so I was feeling this for sure.

Frank came out the gate and at first I didnt see what was going on, and then, I got. How original! What a wonderful story! I personally feel that the story is paramount, and that the content of the story trumps the mechanics, so although I felt mike's was more technically sound, I found the story of Frank' to be more captivating and thus it gets my vote.

Excellent battle.
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