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Physically I'm broken, mentally I split my soul in two Keep half for me, but still give what is owed to you

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That was ill

Out of inspiration, what is this blight that God's giving? And how can you write about life, if you're not living?

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I liked this as well.

The story was nice, the format was maybe just a little too bland. It made the reading feel repetitive after a while. But what it did help with was the overall smoothness and comprehension. I was in and out and didn't have to reread a thing, which is enjoyable for me. There are some really good lines in here, you were especially thoughtful about catching his desolation. The ending fit great as well. I dig it. If it isn't too much, you could feed my piece maybe? See you around man.