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Geno · 10-14-2013, 05:54 PM

This was cool

Phuck took it thouh, had some concepts even though his worddding was weird sometimes I could still make out that the punches hit harder

Shory had an ok verse, wasn't terrible just didn't bring the impact that he needed, fell victim to a more experienced writer is what I see

Sry for the week vote

V-phuck

10-14-2013, 05:54 PM	#11
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	This was cool Phuck took it thouh, had some concepts even though his worddding was weird sometimes I could still make out that the punches hit harder Shory had an ok verse, wasn't terrible just didn't bring the impact that he needed, fell victim to a more experienced writer is what I see Sry for the week vote V-phuck __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*