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e11even · 10-14-2013, 02:38 AM

Oh shit. Ummm... wow. Great battle this week guys! The best I've read thus far.

Pat- This was an amazing verse. This painful journey felt essential on a broader level than the perspective depicted, and that felt really cool. This story felt intimate, accessible despite some abstract ideas, and definitely emotionally connecting for the reader. I liked this more than a little bit and I hope you keep this ambition strong next drop. Thumbs up.

Certain- This shined... this shined beautifully. The start was conventional and harmless, yet very deceiving in its intent. This story was well told, completely accessible, and felt completely faithful to something real. The finishing pieces were pretty great, the twist was absolutely necessary to make this a great piece. Good job.

Awesome battle. You both brought it, and this was surprisingly closer in feel than I expected. Shock value played a major role this time around, where the more captivating turn of events won me over. MVGT Certain. Dope.

10-14-2013, 02:38 AM	#13
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Oh shit. Ummm... wow. Great battle this week guys! The best I've read thus far. Pat- This was an amazing verse. This painful journey felt essential on a broader level than the perspective depicted, and that felt really cool. This story felt intimate, accessible despite some abstract ideas, and definitely emotionally connecting for the reader. I liked this more than a little bit and I hope you keep this ambition strong next drop. Thumbs up. Certain- This shined... this shined beautifully. The start was conventional and harmless, yet very deceiving in its intent. This story was well told, completely accessible, and felt completely faithful to something real. The finishing pieces were pretty great, the twist was absolutely necessary to make this a great piece. Good job. Awesome battle. You both brought it, and this was surprisingly closer in feel than I expected. Shock value played a major role this time around, where the more captivating turn of events won me over. MVGT Certain. Dope. __________________ Ahem.