[Geno]

Cool battle hurrrr.

Split gots a very poetic style. It almost feels like it lacks any real rhyming complexiy but seems to pull itself together.
Thought your approach was dope. Very instrumentally detailed. Tying a date into this was prety dope. Like you went to a concert with the chick or something? I don't know. The rhyme scheme threw me off and made it hard to follow. Kinda crazy.. read it at least three times while waiting on malachi before I realised how much I enjoy it.

Malachi/proph.
Thought you did well man. Was actually surprised by the structure change and rhyming ability. You've progressed. Your storyline wasn't as fun to read though to me.this is prolly a weird vote breakdown. Its early -sry. But mechanically I thought you were sound. Just conceptually I didn't really enjoy your piece as much.

So this one is a toss up really, could go either way from where I stand depending on readers preference. In one corner you have better rhyming mechanics, in the other you have more entertaining material with fair mechanics that at times were better.

Tough battle to call. But I got split based on entertainment value. Even though it took me a while to figure it out, I actually really enjoyed his piece.

V-split
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