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Old 10-14-2013, 01:14 AM   #14
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Tbh breathless you really had me hooked with your verse man, the flow was very smooth an you used the pic well. The line about you being drunk and talkin about a painting killed it tho, like even if that is your approach or "reveal line" it still felt like you just gave up at the end. Solid all the way through till then tho.
inno you also had a strong verse although the flow wasn't as flow it was a more creative take and you followed it through. Good shit
My vote goes to inno for the more complete verse
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