you can flow man, its solid rhyming.. the content just didn't really do anything for me though..i just found myself reading it and not really caring what was being said... then all of a sudden i was done and i didnt even know what it was about... like it was just boring. if the scheming was absolutely retarded then that woulda helped but it was just average really so there wasn't alot here. p.s. i been quickly reading alot of ur recent posts on my phone or whatever so not feeding but i haven minded any of them. that one where EVERYONE was hating on u i actually liked quite a bit lol.. so whatever, im not battler tho so that may be why, but yeah i thought That one was better than this one. u have skills, u just need to try a bit harder.. i have that problem too, alot do. just being honest, stay up
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