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Old 10-13-2013, 07:49 PM   #11
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it got erased AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! WTFMFSACMF!!!!! okay.

I don't have time to do a drawn out vote again...I have a lot of shit to do :(

Zen- A Bizarre, interesting, and fresh take on this topic. A lot of personality and effort in storytelling here. I was thoroughly entertained and the closer was pretty dope.


NYC- Very well written, deep lines and compact solid verse. I thought this came through well, despite the length.


Overall, this comes down to personality and the writer's ability to capture emotion, while building something relatable imo. Great battle, guys. Awesome effort in both of your lanes, respectively as well. MVGT Zen. Next time i'll copy before i submit so my vote doesn't erase next time. My apologies.
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