[Objective]

Zenland: I enjoy the natural progression of your piece. The details are really great and you've established a pretty nice atmosphere for your verse. However, I'm not sure what I think about ''plaster their face'' & ''laugh in their face'', I think it seems rather sloppy in terms of rhymes..

As I start the second paragraph the plot thickens and we're dealing with a man with a pretty heavy personality disorder. Perhaps some sort of schizophrenia? Either way, the end wrapped it up well and I enjoyed the piece as a whole with a really nice correlation to the topic given. Well done.

NYC: Dope rhymescheme and the flow is on point. I take it that you used the screaming character in the topic as a base for your verse, that's dope. And you explain the psychosis it has pretty well and its emotions around whatever it's dealing with. Interesting concepts here and there; ''Life's a chessmatch'' for example. The closure is thought provoking as well. Very well done.

Vote: I felt both pieces were great in different aspects. The painting you were given is world famous and norwegian as well so I know quite abit about it and the mystery that surrounds the people in the background. Everyone says something different when they're asked what they think the people in the background is doing there. This ofc. peaked my interest when reading Zenlands verse and I thought he did a really great job with it. NYC wrote a pretty fucking dope piece as well which was solid from beginning to end.

MVGT: Zenland for a thought out storyline and dope execution. Both did a really good job tho', hard to pick one over the other in this one, lol. Well done.