cool battle. sorry gonna make this quick
patrown - nice verse. the prostitution story was well done. it was pretty straight forward. the rhyming and mechanics were sound. even though in a few parts you seem to just make a line and not have it rhyme anything but I could look past that. good verse
certain - good job bringing all those character into the fold without the story getting convoluted. this was also pretty straight forward. basic rhyming nothing dazzling or out of this world here. strictly a realistic narrative. I liked the last stanza, felt some emotion there. good work
overall- I liked certs better. they were very similar and closely matched verses. but it though certains was just a tad better. thanks for the reads.
vote- certain serpent
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