patrown- This verse was excellent man. Truly. Some lines were a bit mismatched in terms of syllable count but that's just me being picky. The story of this packed allot emotion and was well executed. The only real complaint I have on this, and its a small complaint, the rhymes were just a little too simple for my taste. Besides that, great drop my friend.
Certain- As the other two guys mentioned, your verse was more "reader friendly" which means it was a lighter read...until the end. Julia's a bitch. How you gonna fuck your friends crush and then let her drown herself? Fuckin people these days. But as far as critique goes, this was very poetic and a very enjoyable read. I honestly haven't read a verse from you I haven't liked yet. Great work man.
Honestly, out of all the battles I've read so far this week this is the toughest to vote on. Patrown you've came along way since last season man, but in the end I have to give this one to Certain for the more enjoyable read. My pick for BOTW. Great job fellas.
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